Formative Feedback: Weeks 1-4: Units 9 and Units 10

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Formative Feedback: Weeks 1-4: Units 9 and Units 10

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  1. Jenni B – marking Case Studies – Broadchurch and Dexter Units 9 and 10
    Well done Declan, this is really good work. You have sourced a lot of research, which you have also included in your report – possibly a little too much! Your work can only by 25% quotes or references from other people’s work. I don’t think it is quite 25%, but it is heading there! You are the first student I have had to say that too, so don’t worry too much! Broadchurch is one word by the way! And I couldn’t see the Broadchurch case study plan, but as that was only practice for the main case studies, which you have done very well that is not really a problem! We do need to work on writing a report that flows, but that is something that the whole class and I need to work with, so again, not to worry. It is something that comes with practice. The formative grade for this work is a High Pass.

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